http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/2008/08/analysis-of-barack-obamas-acceptance-speech/ "A good orator is pointed and impassioned" - Cicero Sat, 06 Sep 2008 16:50:09 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/2008/08/analysis-of-barack-obamas-acceptance-speech/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Pointed & Impassioned » The remarkably unsophisticated language of Obama’s acceptance speech Wed, 03 Sep 2008 13:54:56 +0000 http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/blog/?p=83#comment-11 [...] he had an example that I’m sad to say I missed in my Report Card on the speech: For instance, the misuse of the word “more,” appearing for the first time [...] [...] he had an example that I’m sad to say I missed in my Report Card on the speech: For instance, the misuse of the word “more,” appearing for the first time [...]

]]> http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/2008/08/analysis-of-barack-obamas-acceptance-speech/comment-page-1/#comment-10 george Wed, 03 Sep 2008 04:59:51 +0000 http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/blog/?p=83#comment-10 Glad you found it useful, Peter. I've often wished I had the prepared remarks of some business speeches, to see how they differed from the delivered version. What does Steve Jobs actually write in his notes :-) ? Glad you found it useful, Peter. I’ve often wished I had the prepared remarks of some business speeches, to see how they differed from the delivered version. What does Steve Jobs actually write in his notes ?

]]> http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/2008/08/analysis-of-barack-obamas-acceptance-speech/comment-page-1/#comment-9 Peter Bowler Tue, 02 Sep 2008 08:26:50 +0000 http://www.bnnpresentationcoaching.com/blog/?p=83#comment-9 This is a good insight into the twin crafts of speech writing and speech delivery. Seeing the changes that Obama made to the prepared speech is very instructive. This is a good insight into the twin crafts of speech writing and speech delivery. Seeing the changes that Obama made to the prepared speech is very instructive.

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