Archive for August, 2008
Overview of critiques of the Democratic Convention speeches
Six Minutes has a great summary of the Democratic Convention speeches – videos of the main players and quotes from various critics were looking at the technical aspects of the speeches rather than the politics.
Posted: August 31st, 2008 under Online Resources, Real World Examples.
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Report card on Barack Obama’s acceptance speech
Report Card
Writing: C+
Clarity: C
Efficiency: C+
Elegance: B-
Delivery: A-
Pacing: B-
Intonation: B+
Body Language: A
Passion: A
There’s been a lot of praise for Barack Obama’s acceptance speech at the 2008 Democratic Convention, with commentators like Andrew Sullivan calling it “a deeply substantive speech,” and celebrities like Oprah describing the night as “something that was transcendent.”
UPDATE: Gallup Poll of Aug. 30: [...]
Posted: August 30th, 2008 under Delivery, Political Speeches, Report Cards, Structure, Style, Wording.
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Get a quick overview of your word usage
Want a visual way of analyzing word usage in your presentations? Then you’ll love Wordle.net. It creates a word cloud of your most commonly-used words, and gives you a lot of control over what it looks like.
I entered the text of Barack Obama’s acceptance speech at the Democratic Convention last night, and you’ll [...]
Posted: August 29th, 2008 under Fun Stuff, Online Resources, Preparation.
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Democratic clapfest
Dear Screaming Crowds:
Please let your speaker get on with their speech.
Sincerely,
Your Speaker
Last night, it took 1:59 for the crowds at the Democratic Convention to let Barack Obama begin his speech. For those who were counting, he did 32 “thank yous” in an attempt to get them to stop. Adulation is one thing, but [...]
Posted: August 29th, 2008 under Audience Interaction, Fun Stuff.
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Barack Obama plugs into the power of story
Story-telling played a major role in Barack Obama’s acceptance speech in Denver last night – from the introductory video to the numerous references throughout the speech both to his own story and those of ordinary Americans. One particularly effective use of story came when he drew parallels between the stories of others and his [...]
Posted: August 29th, 2008 under Political Speeches, Real World Examples, Storytelling, Structure.
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Bill Clinton hits home with a powerful aphorism
It’s the line everyone’s talking about from Bill Clinton’s speech to the Democratic Convention last night, and a very powerful aphorism it is:
People around the world have always been more impressed by the power of our example than by the example of our power.
It’s simple, easy to remember, and nicely encapsulates what Clinton wanted to [...]
Posted: August 28th, 2008 under Great Aphorisms, Political Speeches, Simplification.
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Bill Clinton shows how to deliver a clear message
Bill Clinton’s speech to the Democratic Convention last night was a good example of “tell them what you’re going to tell them, tell them, then tell them what you’ve told them.” And with that structure, he clearly set up an agenda for Barak Obama (presumably the agenda Obama wants…). Here’s how it played [...]
Posted: August 28th, 2008 under Political Speeches, Simplification.
Tags: Bill Clinton, Democratic Convention
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Fighting against attention spam
Saw this great spelling error the other day on a blog: attention spam. I say ‘great’ because it created an expression that captures a concept I’ve been thinking about for a long time: there’s so much information and just plain stimuli bombarding our brains each day that we’re suffering from attention spam.
Whenever [...]
Posted: August 19th, 2008 under Simplification, Visual Aids.
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The story is the bun
Great metaphor about the role of storytelling by social media strategist Dave Delaney, in an interview by Presentation Revolution:
6. You have given your fair share of presentations. How important is story as it relates to the world of presentations?
The story is the bun. The content is the meat (or vegetarian patty if you [...]
Posted: August 15th, 2008 under Storytelling.
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A top 10 best presentations list
Found this great list of all-time best presentations as picked by KnowHR – with links to video so you can decide if you agree. They also have a follow-up top 10 from their readers.
Posted: August 5th, 2008 under Online Resources, Real World Examples.
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